Review Detail of kickyx in Avatar: Awakened Gamer
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The story was a solid 5/5 until the Azula Arc. Honestly, it just became a wish fulfillment story where MCs decisions make no sense. First of all, he has the power to just kill Azula, so why does he not? It can’t be to preserve plot or “fate” since that’s already screwed up. Secondly, there’s too many OCs being added and it’s quite obvious the author made the mc too op and didn’t know what to do. Quality dropped so much that i just dont feel like continuing the story.
Avatar: Awakened Gamer
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Obviously he has his reasons for talking with Azula. And the OCs are added sparingly, and I have planned the whole story. Spirits are dangerous existences that have existed, and I have done extensive research on the Avatar world and what kinds of spirits are likely to exists. Also what would he gain from killing Azula?
He would get rid of a dangerous opponent who's mental state is obviously not good. Not only that but he would also raise the moral of the other nations and make both his and Aangs name resound through the world. Also, most spirits in Avatar are based off of real-life animals and have abilities similar to those animals. The only exceptions are Raava and Vaatu, who are the good and evil of the world. I am pretty sure there are no animals with a fate-related ability. Your fox spirit also makes no sense as evil spirits have been supressed by Raava I believe. ^ Got most of that after a quick read on the wiki. Some info might be wrong.
HolyJoker:Obviously he has his reasons for talking with Azula. And the OCs are added sparingly, and I have planned the whole story. Spirits are dangerous existences that have existed, and I have done extensive research on the Avatar world and what kinds of spirits are likely to exists. Also what would he gain from killing Azula?
Random but you should make a Lord of Mysteries fanfic if you read the story. If you have no reason to do it then do it for me your unfriendly neighborhood Clown
HolyJoker:Obviously he has his reasons for talking with Azula. And the OCs are added sparingly, and I have planned the whole story. Spirits are dangerous existences that have existed, and I have done extensive research on the Avatar world and what kinds of spirits are likely to exists. Also what would he gain from killing Azula?