It was a nice and encouraging start. He fell from the sky. It was funny too, but suddenly everything happened so fast that I didn't understand anything. One. It is annoying to talk a lot about beauty every time, the most beautiful man I have ever seen feels about a love based only on beauty and this love is wrong and fragile. two . Suddenly, after he woke up, they kissed each other and I fell asleep on his lap. I was so embarrassed by such a messy relationship. Romance has always been awkward so there's no need. It would be great if their relationship was built slowly

The story has potential but the grammer is bad. I hope you can improve the grammer bc i’m really looking forward to reading more of this.

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Gonna give it an encouraging review as I haven’t done much other than overlooking, good look on your endeavour Young authot, remember to make yourself acquainted with Grammarly to fix most of your minor grammar mistakes. Good luck!

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I don't understand how this book has such a good rating. I can't get pass chapter 2 with how gross and obnoxious the writing is, it makes close to no sense and sounds like a bunch of nonsense. I was really looking forward to reading this but it's just impossible to understand the thought process when it seems the author himself doesn't even understand where he's going with the plot. it jumps around way too much and then he starts fighting with himself while breaking the 4th wall. I guess the bot and spam accounts helped get this story the rating it has

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I like it please don't drop it : ))))))))))))))))))))))))) You can also improve the grammar. The idea is vary good. Hope you will continue. ;))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Endof the road and I will be there at the same time I don't have a car so I can get a ride to the store and get some restand feel better soon and that is why I am asking for a friend to talk