Review Detail of Fiction_Stars in I.. Am God?

As a fellow writer, reader(of fiction, Nonfiction and mythologies) and Religious person, I come in peace regarding this review. I really can't find any loopholes (except 2) in this book. it has no plot loopholes and would be more popular if it was slightly more family friendly(though it is fine as it is if you don't want to change it) and the negative view on my religion(if you meant it in a fiction novel as fiction, it would be true). I am sure you might tenner the religion if you jogged your memory but I come in peace so I will end by saying our religion try to promote peace as much as possible and prevent bloodshed and corruption as much as possible(any believer who thinks otherwise is not a believer in our religion. I am sorry if you wrote that tiny context based on the media who tries to show negative stuff about our religion [if you don't want to remove it you can ignore this but if you want to and don't mind the removal you can text me about the specific part]ThanksBest Regards FictionStars(a aspiring writer and avid reader of all english texts eespecially in fiction)