Just an author rating his own novel so that others can ask any questions regarding this work. I am an inexperienced author, so do expect mistakes and inconsistencies. I am also not a native English speaker as the language is just my second language, so expect wrong grammars along the way. I am trying to improve myself (and I think I'm improving a little) as the novel goes on, and I have also began watching writing tips, so wish me luck that I can improve! Anyways, if you have any questions, I'll try my best to answer all of them here. Washing Dishes goes Yaho!

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First of all, It has promise, but could really use some time to develop and nurture what the MC creates instead of moving to the next big thing. The existence of a system completely ruins the pacing by setting preterermined goals and typical narrative progression, and to be honest here– based on my personal oppinion; the Worldbuilding in this novel kind of sucks (Coming from a guy who sent hours and hours on worldbuilding videos and books, as well as higher quality western fantasy books). Second. Do try to be original sometimes. A "creation" type novel like Low Dimensional game or Shepparding Humanity are meant to express the Author's creativity/Imagination. And while they draw from other inspiration form other sources, they introduce it as unique elements into it's world that does not seem like just copy-paste from the originals. Like seriously, Elves? Orcs? Why don't you just copy all of Tolkien while at it. Cultivation? Chinese names despite the Chinese language and the linguistic evolution tract needed for it to exist? Lol, research? what's that? Anyways. While I know that this site isn't really a beacon of quality for these type of stories, creation type stories are my pet peeves, so I have pretty high standards for it. And to be blunt, this read like a 12 year old stole a bunch of elements from generic poorly written webnovels and mashed it all together to form this abomination. Actually develop your Main Character, too? Litteraly a cardboard cutout for the author to insert himself.

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10/10 The MC is really good and the development of the story is not boring as u know. The development of World is also very smooth its not too fast for me since this novel is about MC being god and its normal to the story to have long timeskip. although I'm still at early chapters I feel I will vote my Powerstone in this novel everyday XD

This is the best book Ive ever read, truly one of a kind!!! Are you still writing this book? I had binged it all in one day, and i honestly will be super sad if you end up dropping this😭. Hopefully you don’t, I really want to see more of Matthias’s story!!!

Too rushed and a lot of grammar mistakes can be found here.

this is like reading something child with ADHD wrote. instead of focusing on one story at a time, author just jumps from one story to next without exploring and developing the previous one. it mixes so many genres that it is everything and nothing at the same time.

Keep it up and learn more. The story is good, the world background is good, but the way you portray and narrate the story still needs improvement. Fix anything that needs to be fixed and keep updating steadily if you could.

A very dumb naive mc and bunch of forced plots ,, .. ... .. ........ .. .. . .... .... .. .. .... .. .. .. . ... .. .. ... ... .