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2021-11-12 11:31

Umm, how should I start... this novel is 5 stars for me. although there are not many chaps yet you can clearly feel the potential author have. what I like about the story the most is the character design and the World background. it was so done perfectly and very realistically. the author has also the skill advantage of narrations. she/he is very good with her words. but I still suggest making some changes in the synopsis. by making it a little bit more interesting you can attract readers attention to your super story. with little no mistakes, the book is amazing and worth giving a try. best of luck 👍

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Currently working on a decent synopsis, thank you!

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Hi author here, hoping to shed some light for any lurkers who are thinking about giving this fiction a shot. I will start off with a warning, this fiction contains mature content, profanity, gore, sexual content and traumatising content, and thus should not be viewed if any of this triggers you or by immature audiences. Now a little about this fiction, it is set in a dystopian modern day world currently in the midst of heavy strife and civil unrest. The start of this fiction marks the beginning of a wave of violent demonstrations against governments around the world by the populace who have had enough of their misconduct and mistreatment. The main character, Callum, is an orphan boy with no immediate knowledge of who he is, and wence he came from, he lived in an orphanage until boyhood when he met Bryan and eventually Arielle and they are currently living together as a trio of sibling like friends in ward 108, which could in one word be described as a 'slum'. Following his awakening, he gains newfound strength that he initially believes he can use to better the situation and living conditions of he and his friends. Much of the details of his awakening and what it entails are still unknown, no spoilers but everything will make sense by the end, if you still don't understand by then, let me know and I will personally explain it to you (no cap lol). There is a lot of depth to this story, especially the complex world that it is set in, and as an amateur writer, it will take me some time to flesh it out, heck you would not even be able to guess what this story is actually about until at least chapter 15 so please bare with me and give it the time I believe it deserves, because I'm making sure to take my time to write it to the best of my ability. One last thing, read in between the lines.

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