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Review Detail of Spities in The Over-Break System

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mediocre story which reads like a reddit fanfic. the main character is an obvious self insert, and every other character is a one dementional pawn who is either fully subservient to him or becomes a 'bad guy' out of a children's book.the writing style is beyond cringe and the lack of any depth in the story after 150 chapters is mind numbing. I stopped reading when the author started having people get horny over his 12 year old self insert character. Not worth the read in the slightest

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The Over-Break System

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