Item: The Over-Break System
Rating: 5
Author: Lord_Sogeking

Lord_SogekingLv32yr

2022-05-26 00:41

This is an amazing story, the characters are well written and funny, the action is solid and the dialogue is great, the worldbuilding is much much better than I was expecting, and I just keep getting more and more hooked on this. This story includes an adequate amount of details and explanations without making things confusing, and leaves other things unanswered/open for the readers to wonder what’s to come. This is one of the best fantasy novels I’ve ever read, and with the consistent chapter releases I have no complaints

The Over-Break System

ScotchTy

5.0

677 Chs

Liked by 2 people

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews

PainlessNightmareLv1

I love the premise of this story, between the mixture of Norse mythology, and the relationship the two brothers have, this series is a great binge read for anyone looking to satiate their thirst for an action-packed series

2yr

Turtle6969Lv3

I just wanna start out by saying that this is my favorite book. The reasons for this are, 1. The writing quality is amazing with barely any mess ups or plot holes. 2. The way each character has their own personality and the way they interact with eachother is just amazing and for once actually human. 3. The struggles each character is facing with their own mental trauma and situations is so well planned out, even when the character is acting out of line or different there is a reason for it and it’s actually something that progresses the story in a meaningful way. 4. The book is something that is comedic and serious, and balances the line perfectly. 5. The main characters are people who mess up and who sometimes you don’t like or maybe you favor one way more than the others, but in many ways they are unique and different with their own ways to handle situations. And the final reason why this book is my favorite is that it never gets boring, yes sometimes there are things that you wish would pass quicker and yes the book is not perfect, but I believe that it is the very next best thing.

2yr

Joe_jo_3480Lv14

so far this book is great! interesting, unique, funny and quirky with chapters coming out daily. it's quite a refreshing read. cant wait to read what happens next! [img=recommend]

3yr

Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

You haven't made any comment/review so I'm writing my questions here. 1. Romance/harem? 2. Are there constant shifts in pov between the two brothers. 3. Is there one Mc or do they share being a Mc.

2yr

Shay_OliverLv1

Writing quality = superb. Updates = YES! Story development = superb. Character design = superb. World background= I am already enjoying the setting so yes! This story will take you to the next level of Isekai. Thank you for this author-nim <3

2yr

GnaipafeLv3

I find most of the system stories confusing, provided that it isn't much my cup of tea. However, I found this one easier to get and understand, it is well written and interesting. So i got to give it a five.

2yr

Kaira_GreyLv2

Intriguing start. I would highly recommend this book. Great story. Great characters. I like how I felt being in the scene while reading through the chapters. Great job author!

2yr

Hush_hushLv10

Nice novel. The synopsis alone had me wanting to read and know what happens to the MC from here on and out. And reading the initial chapters, it didn't disappoint. I'm so in love with this book now.

2yr

shrEk2o3Lv12

A few chapters in and I'm hooked. I really love the brother tandem. The story line is awesome. Every chapter will leave you craving for more. On to Cynrik's adventure! Let's go ✊

2yr

SighingCloudsLv4

Well done! An interesting story. It's written well, and has many chapters already! Try it everyone! It's a good story! I'm sure you all will love it!

2yr

Death... and me

Read the first chapter. Maybe you will like it. ;)

Suiyan · Fantasy

4.6

3166 Chs

Strongest Superhuman System

Four years ago, the first-ever Armageddon Class Anima appeared on Earth, destroying everything that it touched and threatening the lives of the entire world's population! But along with it came Superhumans that had the blessing of mana. They rose up to fight against the Armageddon, and leading them was the strongest Superhuman, KING. After two days and three nights of nonstop battle, KING gave his life to stop the Armageddon and give the Superhumans a fighting chance against the invading Anima, and everyone in the world remembers his good deeds and sacrifice! ... Mark was just an average Superhuman living in City A. His daily routine was skipping classes and hanging out with his only two friends while hunting for Anima in secret whenever he could. But this easy life was not going to last for long as the hidden power he sacrificed a long time ago began to awaken once more! [Initializing Superhuman System...] [Recognizing Host... Host Recognized.] [Parsing Constitution. Host Fully Healed. No Traces Of Residual Damage.] "Hello once again, Mark Vanitas. Has it already been four years?" ... Posting Schedule: Two chapters a day everyday, except days when extra chapters are posted along with the regular ones.

Legioneer_1000 · Fantasy

4.7

632 Chs

Supreme Harem God System

[Supreme Harem God System.] This was the Cheat Nux Leander, the man who transmigrated to a cultivation world, received. In a cultivation world, this cheat system allowed Nux to skip the arduous process that takes years, decades, or even centuries. All Nux needed were his lovely wives. The stronger the wife, the more benefits he receives. “What? You are a 100-year-old Grand Master Stage Cultivator? And you call this Unparalleled Talent? Unparalleled Talent my Ass! I am 18 and I am already a King Stage Cultivator, get better bitch!” As ridiculous as it already was, Nux’s cheat did not end there. Cultivation Talent, Special Physiques, Bloodlines, his System could inherit them all! All he needed to do was seduce strong Women. Accompany Nux in his journey as he promotes himself from a mere mortal, to a boy toy of a Lonely Noble, and then to Emperor of the strongest Empire in the world! All while he gets stronger while spending time with his lovely wives. ... Do check out my other novel, Primordial Vampire God System If you want to read revenge, war, blood, gore, vampires, and, the Return of the Forgotten Blood Empire ... AI-Generated Cover. ... Discord: https://discord.gg/qZHRTHGdZG If the link does not work for some reason, DM me: SleepDeprivedSloth

SleepDeprivedSloth · Fantasy

4.5

1741 Chs

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

"Congratulations on receiving the following Unique Skills:- –Appraisal (Basic) –Skill Absorption (Mythic) –Universal Synthesis (Ultimate)" _____________________________________ "Synthesis Skills— Swift Sword Strike + Fire Toad's Breath." "Ding!" "Congratulations! Your Skill Synthesis was successful." "Your skills evolved into: Azula Sword Strike.‌" "Synthesis Materials— Titanium Runic Sword + Wyvern Bones" "Congratulations! You Synthesis was successful. Your Sword has evolved into Skeletal Dragon Sword." ----- In a heart-wrenching tale of loneliness and despair, Ethan's life has been one of unending tragedy. Orphaned at a young age and tormented by a relentless terminal illness, he spent his final days confined to a cold, confined hospital room. As he takes his last breath, he awakened in a mysterious void, where Ethan is given the opportunity to choose three unique skills that will define his new existence. With millions of options but only three choices, he carefully selects his path, setting the stage for an extraordinary journey of Reincarnation. Reincarnated into a fantastical world filled with magical Skills, powerful beings, and untold dangers, Ethan must navigate his new life, wielding the skills he chose to survive and thrive in a realm where anything is possible. But the question remains: Will this second life bring him the happiness and purpose he was denied in his first, or will it lead him down an even darker path? Chapter release: 2 chs/day Guys, its my first time writing, and it might not suit everyone. I can only say sorry in advance. Thanks for reading!

Elias_Nightwalker · Fantasy

4.4

261 Chs

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

“Darkness cannot drive out darkness, only Light can do that," the Goddess Amalthea said as she held William in her loving embrace. "Hate cannot drive out hate, only Love can do that.” In order to help his little brothers and sisters at the orphanage, and save the person he loves, William decided to make the ultimate sacrifice. This selfless act moved the hearts of the Gods into gifting William the opportunity to enter the Cycle of Reincarnation with their blessings. Together with his Mama Ella, and a herd of goats, William embarks on a new journey to find the meaning of happiness in his new life. In a world of Swords and Magic, where adventures roam wild and free, the tale of the Legendary Shepherd is about to begin! [Disclaimer: You might get addicted reading this story.] ----------- Author's other stories. Strongest Necromancer of Heaven's Gate Wizard World Irregular Story Collaboration with other Authors. Kingdom Building Done Right ----------- P.S I would like to thank my editor RedPandaChick for always being there to help me with the edits of my story. Special thanks to Eranoth for helping me Fine-Tune the novel to make it more consistent and less chaotic. -----

Elyon · Fantasy

4.7

1481 Chs

Dimensional Descent

The Third Dimension is collapsing. The Fourth Dimension is descending. First it seemed that only technology would evolve, but who knew the world itself could too? It wasn’t as simple as climate change or tectonic movement. No, the fundamental laws of physics that governed everything were changing. Leonel was fairly lucky. His family was decently well off, his father loved him enough to brew vomit inducing nutrient rich smoothies every morning, and this was both the day of the National Championship and his 521st confession to his dream girl, Aina. As his father always said, nothing was more important than respect and persistence. Unfortunately, everything changed that night. At the after party of ages, the world reached a saturation point and an apocalypse descended. Abilities awakened. Sub-Dimensional Zones opened. Invalids rampaged through the Earth like a virus... Those who could evolve would have a slim chance for survival. Those who couldn’t would die. This novel will be a unique spin on the dungeon/system genre. Dungeons won't be dungeons and the system won't be a system... Take a look to find out what I mean :) -------- For Updates - @Awespec on twitter or https://discord.gg/awespec for discord https://www.instagram.com/awespec_/ https://dimensional-descent.fandom.com/wiki/Aina_Brazinger

Awespec · Fantasy

4.5

3252 Chs

The Academy's Strongest Undercover Professor

“The war is finally over?! Then, what am I going to do with my life?” Caedrel, a man who had spent his entire life fighting, had no idea what to do next. Fortunately, he was offered to become a teacher in the greatest academy in the world. However, he wouldn't be a normal teacher but a spy for his country's Emperor! Doesn’t sound too bad, right? Well, it would have been great, that is…until he learned that his class was for the most talented(weird) students in the entire world. ------------- Update Schedule: 2 Chapters a day Discord Server: https://discord.gg/87MtYJ2Sb6 ------------- Bonus Chapter Scheme below: Every 250 Powerstones = 1 Bonus Chapter Every 75 Golden Tickets = 1 Bonus Chapter Castle Gift = 3 Bonus Chapters Spacecraft Gift = 6 Bonus Chapters Golden Gachapon = 9 Bonus Chapters

JALLEN · Fantasy

4.4

173 Chs

My Elf System

Orion was on his way back home from work. He was hurrying back home to take a nap while planning how he would spend his weekend as well, but while he was lost in thought, a truck suddenly appeared out of nowhere and the last thing he remembered was the truck barreling towards him before everything around him turned dark. However to his surprise, he didn’t feel any pain after having the accident. In fact, he couldn’t see anything. Everything around him seemed dark but when he opened his mouth to speak, he heard the gurgling sounds of a baby. Noticing that the one sounding like a baby was him, Orion tried to open his eyes to know exactly where he was, but when he did, the first thing his eyes fell upon was a stunning beautiful elf, holding him with the most tenderest of care. Not only was she his mother, she was also a queen as well and she had a beautiful sister who adored him just as much as his mother. Aside from this, Orion also noticed he had received a system which allowed him to grow and evolve faster than a normal High Elf but after finding out the huge role his mother played in eradicating the war between all races, Orion vowed to live a happy and fulfilling life with his mother, aunt and a few others he cared a lot about.

PhoenixAsh · Fantasy

4.4

200 Chs