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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv42yrMel_Aniv

The plot was legit and narration was decent. The only downside was that, author's first language was not English. Still, it didn't hindered me from reading it. Hire an editor as soon as possible or learn it yourself [img=recommend] Congratulations on taking the first step 👏 Improve and refine your skills more.

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GentleFlame27AuthorGentleFlame27

Thank you very much for the support, i know i lack in English since I'm not an english person As for the editor, I don't have any budget to afford an editor

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

You can learn editing of you have the time yourself. Don't limit yourself [img=recommend] We all learn as we go on.

GentleFlame27:Thank you very much for the support, i know i lack in English since I'm not an english person As for the editor, I don't have any budget to afford an editor