I liked the story, despite some inconsistencies, really interesting, I wish you had informed that it is a multiversal journey, I'm not a big fan of this type of travel story but I can swallow it, I hope it doesn't take too long to get back to adventure time.

I ain’t wanna put 40 but whatever this is good

The story is amazing!!.....................

it's a good read........................

a Good fanfic and a good read I recommend.

Straight up reading the original and translating each word by yourself gets you a better translation

autocritica :V........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

No está mal la historia pero parece que le falta mucho espíritu para que la obra tenga más unión con el público y no es por ser grosero pero parece que se apresuró demasiado a mejorar y checar al personaje pero es bueno no increíble pero bueno