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ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv113yr
2022-01-29 16:40

I'll be straight up honest bruh, everything was like 4-5 stars up till chapter 50, that's where everything started going downhill, bro got us attached to characters like da Vinci and Moka and just kinda gave them to other dudes, Mike to his son and Vinci to azazel MIGHT also have his other kids under his first son in thier peerage which he said he might to, if he does its just gonna go down even more, everything just had a downgrade, everything's forced and kinda bland now and characters(some)are doing some weird personality swap all the time

Highschool DxD: A New Satan

Alexander_the_grey
4.5
74 Chs

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ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

its so crazy too, how there are just some bad 2-4 chapters than one just goes back to how it was at its peak smh, wish it stayed kinda consistand cuz when there's a "bad" chapter its very, very bland

3yr
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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

For me, it just got to the point where the mc has decided to 'save' everyone. There is literally no plot progression at this point because there are no enemies, nothing can happen. All the story has become is the mc building a perfect wonderland where nothing 'evil' can happen and now he has started to spread it to the world at large. Making the world a utopia. Like cool and all but it is utterly boring to read. All the mc's plans go off without a hitch becomes he is such a genius that everyone else around is stupid.

3yr
35
Devils_and_angels
Devils_and_angelsLv14

I honestly stopped reading this when he started giving away futur harem members making them do unrealistic character changes and taking too many characters from other worlds with no explination like oh my wife brought these guys back... Ok...cerie you can get away with but not the others.

3yr
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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

da Vinci is a old guy so I have no problem that the MC doesn't sleep with him especially when the MC have real women in his harem, he doesn't have to be a desperate guy like virgin that need to sleep with anything that has a hole

2yr
3
ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

if there's a hole, there's a goal

Juhiko:da Vinci is a old guy so I have no problem that the MC doesn't sleep with him especially when the MC have real women in his harem, he doesn't have to be a desperate guy like virgin that need to sleep with anything that has a hole
2yr
5
Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

Well, for the desperate, virgin and gay or bi that not problem and when he hasn't change his gender he has a hole so that is what you referring.

ThatsClassified:if there's a hole, there's a goal
2yr
2
ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

if I say what I wanna say I'll get shadowbanned for a couple months again💀💀

Juhiko:Well, for the desperate, virgin and gay or bi that not problem and when he hasn't change his gender he has a hole so that is what you referring.
2yr
1
Stephen_IV
Stephen_IVLv13

let loose, my friend... show them the great power dormant in you...

ThatsClassified:if I say what I wanna say I'll get shadowbanned for a couple months again💀💀
2yr
1
Unfinished_sentenc
Unfinished_sentencLv3

Again

ThatsClassified:if I say what I wanna say I'll get shadowbanned for a couple months again💀💀
2yr
Mark_Cross
Mark_CrossLv4

exactly my thoughts 😂

Aeternabilis:For me, it just got to the point where the mc has decided to 'save' everyone. There is literally no plot progression at this point because there are no enemies, nothing can happen. All the story has become is the mc building a perfect wonderland where nothing 'evil' can happen and now he has started to spread it to the world at large. Making the world a utopia. Like cool and all but it is utterly boring to read. All the mc's plans go off without a hitch becomes he is such a genius that everyone else around is stupid.
2yr
1
SaberGilgamesh
SaberGilgameshLv4

True and real. If you love getting cucked or watching other males getting cucked then this story is for you. If you love a lack of proper story progression then you're in the right place.

1yr
2
Other Reviews
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

This a dxd fanfic but mc dont have a harem so of course this automaticaly become a trash dxd fanfic. worst of all author is one of these crazy people that dont like to change a pairing even in a fanfiction so grafyia the best girl of the series continue with the 2 worst character and siscon sirzech, so the level of this fic is even worse than a wish fulfilment one for me

3yr

SalsitaHabanera2k
SalsitaHabanera2kLv12

The protagonist was NTR'd by his own son... can you believe it? Lol its game over bruh gg [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr
AshbornKRAVKE
AshbornKRAVKELv10

First of all, I LOVE THIS FANFIC! This take place at civil war meaning before canon dxd start so it's already going to be good. Romance is good so far, I do hope it's not big harem since I'm sick with it. We need more good story rather than good harem.

3yr
CkLance
CkLanceLv15

Honestly I should have have just listened to the critic reviews. The story is overall well put together with pretty good grammar and story development. Things are fine until chapter 49, but it isn't NTR like people are saying. It simply comes down to the author changing their mind about Moka being in the MCs harem, but the way its done feels like a massive betrayal to the readers. The author set expectations for Moka to join the MCs harem, built them up very well, but got chapter 49 and basically did a 180. Basically the author tells the readers Lith can't see Moka that way because she was a 'daughter figure', but turns around and makes Moka fall in love with her 'brother figure' in a few sentences. I get it author, you changed your mind and thats fine... but tell us how it happened. It was basically 'his son's blood tastes good too (100+ years timeskip) Moka loves his son now' ggez

3yr
Hopps
HoppsLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Step 1: Create a waifu in story Step 2: Set her up, show her interest in MC Step 3: Do a timeskip during which waifu does 180 and goes for the son of MC Step 4: ??? Step 5: Live on with disappointment of what you have read just now Okay, to be fair, in my opinion the idea of having potential waifu change her mind for a someone is not bad at all. The issue was how it was delivered. For quite a few chapters there was a build-up showing that waifu wants to be with MC and is trying to break his 'defenses'. And then instead of showing us how she develops feelings for someone else and that she only feels familial love to MC we got a FAT TIMESKIP that just causes 180 of emotional development up to now. On top of that said waifu stays as one of the pieces of the MC instead of joining her new love which only increases giant disappointment. I do not believe that MC got NTR-d but can definitely see why some people say that.

3yr
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

Author has never heard of "show, don't tell." Literally every single chapter is the main character explaining what happened in his own head/as the narrator. Almost nothing actually happens in a different way. It reads less like a story and more like an info dump where the protagonist lets us know everything that happened.

3yr
BigStig97
BigStig97Lv13

Very good story so far!! Hope to see more!..................................!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.! m mmjbdbbsishdbdbakajsjslksksjsjsjsj

3yr
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