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God_of_NothingnessLv133yr
2022-01-11 22:58

overall it's alright.... but the lemon scenes are not good... I don't understand what is lacking... but I can't get a turn on at all... it all just feels nauseous... the dual cultivation instead of enjoyment... feels more like a chore that is forcibly presented as enjoyment...

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Evil_Dao
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Do you get that feeling from all the lemon scenes or just some in particular? If it's all of them and you can't tell what is lacking, it might be that my lemon style (so to speak), is just not suited to your tastes. If it's some chapters specifically, maybe we can try to pinpoint the problem and get better.

God_of_Nothingness
God_of_NothingnessLv13

i think probably the writing style for lemon is not suited for me... the choice of words just don't hit me right... 🤔

Ramon69
Ramon69Lv11

Say, who is the elder brother. Is he one of the protagonists. Can you give me a brief explanation of the story. Please!!!

Evil_Dao:Do you get that feeling from all the lemon scenes or just some in particular? If it's all of them and you can't tell what is lacking, it might be that my lemon style (so to speak), is just not suited to your tastes. If it's some chapters specifically, maybe we can try to pinpoint the problem and get better.
Ancient_Rebel
Ancient_RebelLv12

nobody cares 😂

Ramon69:Say, who is the elder brother. Is he one of the protagonists. Can you give me a brief explanation of the story. Please!!!
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