there are many original characters in this work. and she is very very very very stretched and boring. no interesting events (except a meeting with the professor, everything else is deadly boredom). I don't recommend it.
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say what you like, but I have done this develop characters that will be very much relevant in the coming events, and I literally asked the readers if the pace was okay, I got my greenlight and continued. So you are probably someone that is too impatient and can't read story development, and just like story's that have mcs destroying city's just cuz they wanted. So I won't persuade you to continue reading, cuz I don't need someone like you reading the fic, but for those actually interested, please read... lol Aight bye.
thank you for responding. but in any case, adios.🤙
arekuruutento:say what you like, but I have done this develop characters that will be very much relevant in the coming events, and I literally asked the readers if the pace was okay, I got my greenlight and continued. So you are probably someone that is too impatient and can't read story development, and just like story's that have mcs destroying city's just cuz they wanted. So I won't persuade you to continue reading, cuz I don't need someone like you reading the fic, but for those actually interested, please read... lol Aight bye.
guy gives a decent review and you can't just bow out but have to try and slight him.. the mc is barely 2d and the dialog is utter crp and you pretty much speed him to be op by the super easy missions that are over in a small paragraph and then gets massive rewards. example of a mission: he is in a car and get a mission to survive, so you expect an attack and a fight.... nope car is blown up and that's it and the guy gets like 2.5 increase and he did nothing to earn it.... just got out of the car after the explosion , was nothing he had to do to survive , he's part God so he is almost indescribable ....
arekuruutento:say what you like, but I have done this develop characters that will be very much relevant in the coming events, and I literally asked the readers if the pace was okay, I got my greenlight and continued. So you are probably someone that is too impatient and can't read story development, and just like story's that have mcs destroying city's just cuz they wanted. So I won't persuade you to continue reading, cuz I don't need someone like you reading the fic, but for those actually interested, please read... lol Aight bye.
yes, the idiotic amount of bm you give him for easy quests will make him op too fast. I live how you still try to insult people posting reviews when the story is insult enough to readers.
arekuruutento:say what you like, but I have done this develop characters that will be very much relevant in the coming events, and I literally asked the readers if the pace was okay, I got my greenlight and continued. So you are probably someone that is too impatient and can't read story development, and just like story's that have mcs destroying city's just cuz they wanted. So I won't persuade you to continue reading, cuz I don't need someone like you reading the fic, but for those actually interested, please read... lol Aight bye.
lol OK, this story ain't your cup of tea and I won't bother to keep you reading, if it's an insult, then the people still reading won't be reading. And I won't deny that I sounded quite venomous with my reply, but yeah it's an insult, and ill try to improve my ability, am not a writer but a reader that wants to write what he likes, not a writer that is trying to see to the needs of a reader on this site. Odàbó
Brezer:yes, the idiotic amount of bm you give him for easy quests will make him op too fast. I live how you still try to insult people posting reviews when the story is insult enough to readers.
good reply thank you, its not so much what this sites readers look for its just the feel the story has. you have a good concept but it feels the mc is really shallow its mainly pointed toward the combat/missions and they feel rushed, maybe it's because of the BM meter, you have to force it up to get to unlock his skills and I get that, just maybe there was a way to it without the BM like that, no idea. I have never read a werewolf in marvel (doesn't mean there isn't I just haven't seen it) so the slate is open for you so that's a plus, maybe interactions on a social or personal level woukd help to build character depth but that just a suggestion (not talking romance lol) anyway thanks for the reply and hope this helps a bit if any. good luck
arekuruutento:lol OK, this story ain't your cup of tea and I won't bother to keep you reading, if it's an insult, then the people still reading won't be reading. And I won't deny that I sounded quite venomous with my reply, but yeah it's an insult, and ill try to improve my ability, am not a writer but a reader that wants to write what he likes, not a writer that is trying to see to the needs of a reader on this site. Odàbó
thanks bro, this is something I have been looking for and not direct provocative reviews or comments, and I'll keep to ur suggestions, very helpful.
Brezer:good reply thank you, its not so much what this sites readers look for its just the feel the story has. you have a good concept but it feels the mc is really shallow its mainly pointed toward the combat/missions and they feel rushed, maybe it's because of the BM meter, you have to force it up to get to unlock his skills and I get that, just maybe there was a way to it without the BM like that, no idea. I have never read a werewolf in marvel (doesn't mean there isn't I just haven't seen it) so the slate is open for you so that's a plus, maybe interactions on a social or personal level woukd help to build character depth but that just a suggestion (not talking romance lol) anyway thanks for the reply and hope this helps a bit if any. good luck
Wow an actual decent argument where people are not just insulting each other,color me impress.
arekuruutento:thanks bro, this is something I have been looking for and not direct provocative reviews or comments, and I'll keep to ur suggestions, very helpful.
I feel you're mistaking this place with Twitter. Although there are some idiots in here, most of the times the arguments are ended peacefully. Well, at least from what I have seen.
leo26:Wow an actual decent argument where people are not just insulting each other,color me impress.
