Review Detail of Aenin in Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

Item: Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
Rating: 4

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AeninLv52yrAenin

The grammar on this story needs some work. One glaring issue is that dialogue. The person speaking and what they said are in two different paragraphs. It makes it really hard to tell who is talking.

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

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JustABoxWithAmmoLv13JustABoxWithAmmo

I can agree on the dialogue part, but grammar? Idk, the translation seems fine. Could you point out an instance of where it needs some work? I'm curious to see some.

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