Alright, looks like I gotta be a bit more critical over this work here, so here we go. The writing quality is rather, well, fresh, but it is palatable for the newer members who decide to pick this little munchkin up. The story development is just extremely speedy at the beginning, and truth be told it does seem to be somewhat cliche, but that little bit is just my person thoughts so take it with a grain of salt. The character's an odd one for sure, but as the writer themselves said, they were a "novice" so I'll be here hoping the quality ups a little. The updates seem pretty decent so far, about six chapters in five days when I made this review. And I will say this, the author stated that they may or my not have rewritten the story from when their MC was rather unlikeable in chapter 30 by their standards, so yeah. And finally, the world. It's a zombie apocalypse, not quite new. So yeah, overall, it's a 3.2 for me chief. It could get better, and it might, but hope is something that I have a very limited amount of, and I genuinely hope this does heighten in quality.
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Thank you for the review!!! Iwill try my best to get the quality better.
you're welcome friend, also I'd like to satiate a little query that's been plaguing me of late. Are any of the characters that you make a reference to something? Or are they just purely OC?
So, Lynn's grandfather, one of the future side characters, and the villains are reference from the legend of King Arthur (since I love retellings I wanted to add one of them into my story), but all other characters are OG. ᵔ ᴥ ᵔ
ooooh, somebody with enough aptitude to actually create OCs. very tasteful
hahaha it is more...someone scared of copyright! hehehe
