Review Detail of Mocha_Bunny in Zachary’s Thorne Garden

Please review this note~ Hello! Thank you for reading. This is a novel I had thought up one night and found interesting to develop. All the magic and world building is based off my ideas and theories to how a world with this type of magic works. In case you’re wondering, it is a bit of a slowburn romance between Arina and Zachary, and this story will also include character development for the side characters. I feel like a story where only the main characters improve themselves isn’t a true story, since everyone is constantly changing. I’m no where near a professional regarding my writing, so I apologize in advanced. Arina’s anxiety mimics mine, so that’s how I have chosen to portray it. In my head, I thought that even if I ever were reborn, my anxiety likely would not disappear unlike many protagonists in books. This was a bit of a long note, but thank you for reading and even considering to pick up my novel x! I’m only 16 but please don’t be afraid to constructively criticise my work.