For me its a 4.2 star. Why? MC was OC on Legacies fanfic. He has his own lore as the story progress. He became OP after he comes back from the dead that I think theres no one can match him interms of prowess in Legacies verse. But take note the author added some other verse in this fanfic so you can see the him being overpower was questionable despite the Legacies characters specially hope call himself powerful. About MC character characteristic. He was polite, honest but somehow some circumstances forcing him to lie. He only like one woman and has a relationship with her but I doubt will stay it that way since theres a second woman that author building up for MC.(honestly for me its ok if its a harem). MC didnt know how powerful he is. About the physical description of MC is somewhat vague and theres no detailed explanation about him but rhe author describe him was charming and has way of words with woman. About the story development. Its ok for me but I wish the season 1 take a few chapters more to finish. Maybe the MC didnt involve himself on some Legacies episode and author just showcase and write where the MC was only included. For me since I have a habit on reading fanfic on ff dot net. I find this fanfic lack of having different point of views of characters involve in the MC or how they react. Maybe the author thought that the reader was familiar which each characters of Legacies that the author dont bother to write different character perspective. I only see some character growth different from the TV shows if they are involve on MC. Word count is short, thats what I expected since this fanfic was posted on webnovel. Most of the fanfic posted on this website has low word count. About the world building, I have nothing to say since the story is getting started. I hope this fic will last long and has many chapters to come. Since I stacking up most of fanfic I reads and I was relying on some mtl chinese fanfic with many chapters just to stiate my hunger for fanfic nowadays.
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your comment again got banned I suggest that you use made up words.
Well second woman guess this is removed from my library
