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Review Detail of Eskapismus in A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

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Eskapismus
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The story was good at the start with him exploring new worlds the Skyrim ark was my fav until he started collecting girls like Pokemon having around at least 9 with him its so bad at the end

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

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TrappedInMyHead
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Did Venelana ever divorce her husband? I stopped reading when she got with the MC and still wanted to stay married to Zeoticus. That's literally the only thing that got on my nerves, if that situation is resolved I want to start reading again.

H3R0Y:…Wdym? Currently, chapter 414 (1.4 Million Words), there are only 8 girls. Meridia, Artoria, Scathach, Jinn, Raikou, Yasaka, Izanami, and lastly, Salem. Comparing to other harem MCs I read about that get like a dozen girls a hundred chapters in, this is nothing. The author also develop their interests and feeling slowly, not “Omg he is so handsome!” and imediately have s3x. I mean, he takes them on dates and stuff! Anyways, I’m writing this because I’m slightly miffed that you gave this 1 star just because of your dislike of harems. I’m not saying that you have to like harems or anything, just that I don’t thing you should give such a negative review on an author’s hard work when there are many other positive aspects to the story. Anyways if you’re reading this, thank you for your time and I hope you have a good day. ✌️ Peace.
H3R0Y
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…Wdym? Currently, chapter 414 (1.4 Million Words), there are only 8 girls. Meridia, Artoria, Scathach, Jinn, Raikou, Yasaka, Izanami, and lastly, Salem. Comparing to other harem MCs I read about that get like a dozen girls a hundred chapters in, this is nothing. The author also develop their interests and feeling slowly, not “Omg he is so handsome!” and imediately have s3x. I mean, he takes them on dates and stuff! Anyways, I’m writing this because I’m slightly miffed that you gave this 1 star just because of your dislike of harems. I’m not saying that you have to like harems or anything, just that I don’t thing you should give such a negative review on an author’s hard work when there are many other positive aspects to the story. Anyways if you’re reading this, thank you for your time and I hope you have a good day. ✌️ Peace.

Eskapismus
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H3R0Y:…Wdym? Currently, chapter 414 (1.4 Million Words), there are only 8 girls. Meridia, Artoria, Scathach, Jinn, Raikou, Yasaka, Izanami, and lastly, Salem. Comparing to other harem MCs I read about that get like a dozen girls a hundred chapters in, this is nothing. The author also develop their interests and feeling slowly, not “Omg he is so handsome!” and imediately have s3x. I mean, he takes them on dates and stuff! Anyways, I’m writing this because I’m slightly miffed that you gave this 1 star just because of your dislike of harems. I’m not saying that you have to like harems or anything, just that I don’t thing you should give such a negative review on an author’s hard work when there are many other positive aspects to the story. Anyways if you’re reading this, thank you for your time and I hope you have a good day. ✌️ Peace.
H3R0Y
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I’m confused, does this mean you’re laughing at me for writing such a long complaint or does it mean you’re acknowledging my opinion?

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Eskapismus
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H3R0Y:I’m confused, does this mean you’re laughing at me for writing such a long complaint or does it mean you’re acknowledging my opinion?
H3R0Y
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Alrighty, keep your secret then

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Chaos_Order8
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Ohhhh, so he didn't get together with my favorite black cat yet huh.... Sad but I can live with this and 🎶

H3R0Y:…Wdym? Currently, chapter 414 (1.4 Million Words), there are only 8 girls. Meridia, Artoria, Scathach, Jinn, Raikou, Yasaka, Izanami, and lastly, Salem. Comparing to other harem MCs I read about that get like a dozen girls a hundred chapters in, this is nothing. The author also develop their interests and feeling slowly, not “Omg he is so handsome!” and imediately have s3x. I mean, he takes them on dates and stuff! Anyways, I’m writing this because I’m slightly miffed that you gave this 1 star just because of your dislike of harems. I’m not saying that you have to like harems or anything, just that I don’t thing you should give such a negative review on an author’s hard work when there are many other positive aspects to the story. Anyways if you’re reading this, thank you for your time and I hope you have a good day. ✌️ Peace.
H3R0Y
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They did meet but are only friends...For now...

Chaos_Order8:Ohhhh, so he didn't get together with my favorite black cat yet huh.... Sad but I can live with this and 🎶
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Actually_Satan
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You forgot his grandmother is in the harem

H3R0Y:…Wdym? Currently, chapter 414 (1.4 Million Words), there are only 8 girls. Meridia, Artoria, Scathach, Jinn, Raikou, Yasaka, Izanami, and lastly, Salem. Comparing to other harem MCs I read about that get like a dozen girls a hundred chapters in, this is nothing. The author also develop their interests and feeling slowly, not “Omg he is so handsome!” and imediately have s3x. I mean, he takes them on dates and stuff! Anyways, I’m writing this because I’m slightly miffed that you gave this 1 star just because of your dislike of harems. I’m not saying that you have to like harems or anything, just that I don’t thing you should give such a negative review on an author’s hard work when there are many other positive aspects to the story. Anyways if you’re reading this, thank you for your time and I hope you have a good day. ✌️ Peace.
H3R0Y
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They talked about setting up the divorce. Also, Venelana only stay with Zeoticus as friends. Personally, I don’t see anything wrong with them staying as friends after their marriage ended, its wholesome how their relationship didn’t sour even after they stopped loving each other.

TrappedInMyHead:Did Venelana ever divorce her husband? I stopped reading when she got with the MC and still wanted to stay married to Zeoticus. That's literally the only thing that got on my nerves, if that situation is resolved I want to start reading again.
TrappedInMyHead
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Yeah, I don't have a problem with the friends thing. It's just since she doesn't want to mess up things for the Gremorys she will continue to act like she is in a relationship with him in public, it didn't really seem fair to the MC imo. Also another question since i've forgotten a lot of stuff, was there any yuri between the harem members in this? I've grown to dislike that since the time I read this. Thanks for answering me btw.

H3R0Y:They talked about setting up the divorce. Also, Venelana only stay with Zeoticus as friends. Personally, I don’t see anything wrong with them staying as friends after their marriage ended, its wholesome how their relationship didn’t sour even after they stopped loving each other.
H3R0Y
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I think there was one time where Scathach and Raikou teamed up but it was just foreplay. All the other lemons so far are only solo between Wilheim and the girls. So no, I don’t think there’s Yuri.

TrappedInMyHead:Yeah, I don't have a problem with the friends thing. It's just since she doesn't want to mess up things for the Gremorys she will continue to act like she is in a relationship with him in public, it didn't really seem fair to the MC imo. Also another question since i've forgotten a lot of stuff, was there any yuri between the harem members in this? I've grown to dislike that since the time I read this. Thanks for answering me btw.