Review Detail of Lascivious in GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
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Take this with a grain of salt, and see this as constructive criticism. As a first time reader you can’t really take the words of an author at face value when they say it’s worth it or not when comes with their work. You can’t really expect an reader who barely read enough of MC (due to the heavy amount of filter in the early stages of the book) to spend their own money to unlock chapters. who knows weather or not its worth it. Based on the little amount of screen time the MC has before the paywall, I don’t think it’s worth it to continue reading due to problem of information or lack thereof. Honestly seems like story more revolving around the Elf guy than the official MC, based on how he has all the basic qualities of a MC (insanely talented, transmigrated from Earth, creator of a system, etc etc) and everyone singing praises about him. Look there as to be a reason why although it has well over a thousand chapters it’s so low on the ratings, it could be good for all I know, but the beginning ain’t what you wanna see on a top rated book. Side note: You gotta delete those useless chapters, you are already limiting the amount of chapters you have to read, why do it more?
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
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ShadowTraton:I'm not sure I follow? Am I supposed to be an alt of the author?
Thank you for the review. I understand the lack of faith you have as a reader. I will delete the useless chapters today. I will also put in some work on the early chapters. I want to know. How many chapters did you read before you quit?I know you can't take my word for it. But you can take the word of other readers.
Honestly I’ve read up to chapter 31 but going to continue reading as i’ve seen reviews on how it’s on par with novels like reverend insanity, soul of negary, and the stuff-alike but only problem being a excessive amount of repetitive info dumps.
DMadLord:Thank you for the review. I understand the lack of faith you have as a reader. I will delete the useless chapters today. I will also put in some work on the early chapters. I want to know. How many chapters did you read before you quit?I know you can't take my word for it. But you can take the word of other readers.
You given it enough of your time. Unfortunately, as I stated in the auxillary chapter, the first volume is not when the action begins. It is tedious. Maybe I could have written it better but I am not that good. The funny thing is that you're more have almost reached the point where he reincarnates. That's when the story picks up.
Lascivious:Honestly I’ve read up to chapter 31 but going to continue reading as i’ve seen reviews on how it’s on par with novels like reverend insanity, soul of negary, and the stuff-alike but only problem being a excessive amount of repetitive info dumps.
If you don't mind the writing (at least you haven't mentioned it in your review) you're absolutely in for a treat. It certainly has immense potential but many things have only been laid out by the author so far, so depending on how well those straws are made use of, it could either turn into a masterpiece, or just remain a really good story.
Lascivious:Honestly I’ve read up to chapter 31 but going to continue reading as i’ve seen reviews on how it’s on par with novels like reverend insanity, soul of negary, and the stuff-alike but only problem being a excessive amount of repetitive info dumps.
ShadowTraton:If you don't mind the writing (at least you haven't mentioned it in your review) you're absolutely in for a treat. It certainly has immense potential but many things have only been laid out by the author so far, so depending on how well those straws are made use of, it could either turn into a masterpiece, or just remain a really good story.
If that's the problem, then you can rest assured, I'm not...at least I wouldn't be a very good alt when I grasp my hair every time I see a sentence beginning with "It is" that follows the exact same sentence structure as the one before, or repetitions stemming from a refusal to use run-on sentences, not to mention the unreasonable and omnipresent shifts in tenses. I can compliment the story because it's amazing but that's unfortunately where my praises end. Pacing is nothing exceptional and has its ups and downs while the writing quality is the bare minimum and for me only tolerable because of a lack of other options due to the scarcity of novels in this genre. That's actually quite the interesting topic, so if you want to continue it, I encourage you to join the official discord and either hit me up there directly or per private message ^^ I'm sure I can convince you one way or another.
Greekfirefly:I believe that’s what they are implying.
ShadowTraton:If that's the problem, then you can rest assured, I'm not...at least I wouldn't be a very good alt when I grasp my hair every time I see a sentence beginning with "It is" that follows the exact same sentence structure as the one before, or repetitions stemming from a refusal to use run-on sentences, not to mention the unreasonable and omnipresent shifts in tenses. I can compliment the story because it's amazing but that's unfortunately where my praises end. Pacing is nothing exceptional and has its ups and downs while the writing quality is the bare minimum and for me only tolerable because of a lack of other options due to the scarcity of novels in this genre. That's actually quite the interesting topic, so if you want to continue it, I encourage you to join the official discord and either hit me up there directly or per private message ^^ I'm sure I can convince you one way or another.
Lascivious:Honestly I’ve read up to chapter 31 but going to continue reading as i’ve seen reviews on how it’s on par with novels like reverend insanity, soul of negary, and the stuff-alike but only problem being a excessive amount of repetitive info dumps.