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Vee_High
Vee_HighLv132yr
2022-06-11 23:09

I just started this story and haven't finished it yet buh I think it's worth a review already, the story is pretty interesting with a lot of mystery at the start, makes you want to find the outcome of different actions, though I would have to say that the characters are too vague, and too many scene jumps, though its pretty interesting, nice job

Critical Risk (Reboot)

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AngelLily
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An early review. This is a good book and has a lot of potentials. The first chapter was intriguing and got me hooked to opening the next chap. Keep it up, author!

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This book is amazing! The plot is unlike most have seen n we novel far! The only things I ave complain about is the grammar and the writing skills, but I believe that the author will improve with time. Thank you author !

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Cnrd
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Yo! here for another tough-love review. The opening was good and I can see the writing style of the author has improved importantly the dialogue of the characters. Less confusing and it was more organized before. There were so many questions left without answers and I believe it was the intriguing part of this novel. We need the author to continue this novel because it has a thrill. Truly, the only problem was the pacing so take time to build your world. This novel have potential good luck![img=recommend]

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KV_Cleo
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The book has improved alot and I like how the characters are in the story. I like how the story has kept me intrigued. It has a good plot. Keep up the good work!

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Washington50
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hmm the story has promise but the thing sort of confused me is are they keep dying and come back to life or there are two stories explaining one story back and forth. it has promise but it seems chaotic to me as I read it but it was a good read though.

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Bao_Karen
Bao_KarenLv13

What I noticed immediately is how the sentences weren't making much sense, some of it looked broken up or was just worded poorly, I generally felt confused reading some of the sentences. Author San I suggest you read your finished product out loud to get a better understanding on what I am saying. next I am interested in how the story plot is going which is why I gaved it a 4 stars. and character design I am not really seeing it yet but hope I will see it soon. Not seeing much of the world background yet which is why I have put a 3, but I hope you will cover it in future chapters. keep up with the good work (◕ᴗ◕✿)

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OneSevenEight
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This is an improvement over the last novel. There's still some issues that could be worked out, but the most glaring issue of all, the pacing, seems to be drastically improved. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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Shade_Arjuun
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Okay I must definitely note the quality of the writing has definitely improved from the last book CR. The flow of the story is good and the characters are good... this is an early review so there's not much to expand on... however the author does a good job at grabbing your attention... Grammar still needs some improvement but this book has potential ... Please keep writing author and we'll keep supporting 😀😀😀

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GODOFCAT
GODOFCATLv2

The storyline was good and has a promising future however the grammar and the way you use the (,') and more destroy your novel. The storyline was great if you plan it well however it makes me confused when he died and comes back to life again since your description explanation was bad

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