Review Detail of 3PoundsOfRice in Sasuke: The Ultimate Shinobi

Consider a long time before giving my rating. The story isn't bad, it has a lot of nice details like for example the change in Zabuza's defeat, you didn't wait for Kakashi to be caught. Instead you wrote a pretty good fight scene. There are few negative points, like for example the time jump, sometimes it's too sudden and you don't add enough narrative content before doing it. For example the 7 days of training, you could have had a conversation with his team, by skipping that it feels like Naruto and Sakura don't exist, also Sasuke looks like a robot. You're still a novice writer, so there's a lot of room for improvement. Your fanfic is already better than most. Now I'd like to contribute my two cents: There is an easy and reasonable way for Sasuke to awaken the Mangekyo, he could regain the memories about the massacre (maybe he's confused, but I understand he doesn't remember or lost Sasuke's feelings for his family) It seems like a very strong emotional punch to me. He could copy the raikage's chakra mode and combine it with susano.