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Are you for real? I just want to warn people who's intending to read this that although it is tagged as 'completed' it's actually not. Yep, it's not. It's listed with 110 chapters btw so if in the future it's updated just keep this in mind. Anyway, in the firt place I don't have any expectations but still, it's frustrating to suddenly find out in the last chapter that it's actually just the part 1. I tried to look for raws to check how many chapters in total but i couldn't find it. I'm annoyed. Anyway, I'll just discuss the characters and the situation for this review. There's nothing much to say about the father and grandpa. I find their character stiff and without much depth. Sure their characteristics and personality were blatantly written but because of that, there's little chapters dedicated to them to actually showcase those personality so in the end you just have to believe how they were described. Little depth, in short. As for the FL, I'll cut her some slack and excuse her immature views and perception for her age. She's young, what do you expect? The challenges she's gone through weren't much and the intensity could be compared to petty fights with children their age. But she's naive, kind, and smart. As for the ML, they only met once. There's also nothing much to say about him. Her friends were even more mentioned than him. I find it awkward how their meeting went. He was 18 at that time and the FL was just a little girl. I'm not sure about the age but i know she's just in her elementary days. I feel a bit disgusted with how other people (like his comrades) tease them and how the story is leaning on that direction. Please don't.

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