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Review Detail of Jae_0527 in Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)

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Jae_0527
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No offense... But isn't this just a copy of 'The Author's pov'?. The cataclysm, the hero magnet of disaster and many more... What am I saying even from chapter one it was pretty obvious. You only tweaked a little things and wrote them in your own words. I'm trying to read it, but I feel like like I'm reading a Walmart version of the original.

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Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)

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Carrot_Dude
Carrot_DudeAuthorCarrot_Dude

A reader already pointed out the similarities in the power system and I've already clarified that I did take inspiration from works like ' The Author's Pov.' and ' The Novel's extra.'' but the similarity stops there. The plot is completely different. I don't know how many chapters you've read and I can't force you to continue so you may think whatever you want. Thank you for reading either way. [img=recommend]

Jae_0527
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I don't mean the whole plot in general. I mean the little details that are a mirror of author's pov. It will throw some people off so maybe you could change the names or something. It will seem more original that way. You could change cataclysm to 'disaster' or 'catastrophe' or something. Even the occupation and other things even you know are a copy. At least give them different names. Or else I might not be the only one complaining in the future.

Carrot_Dude:A reader already pointed out the similarities in the power system and I've already clarified that I did take inspiration from works like ' The Author's Pov.' and ' The Novel's extra.'' but the similarity stops there. The plot is completely different. I don't know how many chapters you've read and I can't force you to continue so you may think whatever you want. Thank you for reading either way. [img=recommend]
Carrot_Dude
Carrot_DudeAuthorCarrot_Dude

I get what you mean. I didn't get this from your review though but you're right. I'll make changes to the small details, also the mc gets a new job in chapter 25. Thank you for reading !![img=recommend]

Jae_0527:I don't mean the whole plot in general. I mean the little details that are a mirror of author's pov. It will throw some people off so maybe you could change the names or something. It will seem more original that way. You could change cataclysm to 'disaster' or 'catastrophe' or something. Even the occupation and other things even you know are a copy. At least give them different names. Or else I might not be the only one complaining in the future.