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Spark04
Spark04Lv32yr
2022-01-24 18:08

Pretty good! Main character has amazing character development throughout the story This novel gives too many twists so it is also one of the charming points of the novel

Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)

Carrot_Dude
4.6
4 Chs

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Carrot_Dude
Carrot_DudeAuthor

thank you 😁!!!!!!

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Carrot_Dude
Carrot_DudeAuthor

Hello, the author here, As this is my first time writing a webnovel, there maybe several flaws in my writing. The first 5 chapters are used for setting up the world of the novel properly, so the pacing is a little slow. But after those 5 chapters, the novel goes in a comfortable pace. I got the inspiration to write this novel, from novel's like ' The Novel's Extra' and anime like, ' My Hero Academia', But it isn't exactly alike. Only the basic premise is similar and it is it's own thing. Also I got the inspiration for the power system from the novel ' The Author's POV' I mentioned this in the comments earlier but decided to add it into the review since people didn't read the comment. As I said earlier, the plot is completely different though. Comment your thoughts on how to improve the story. Happy Reading !!!

3yr

X3NON
X3NONLv1

Reveal spoiler

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zed_me
zed_meLv1

well I don't usually read books but I do read some, my friend recommend me to read this and actually it's a pretty solid book. I like the narration of the story and the cold scenes too,this book actually has got what it takes to be in my favorites

3yr
Lordrim
LordrimLv2

don't listen to the other guy who says this novel is similar to the authors POV well yes they reincarnate into the books they wrote and also yes there are demons but.... the plot is very different for one thing there are also angels and the main difference is that the MC doesn't mind changing the plot and he is also an antihero i guess. so there isn't much similarities overall its a pretty good read so far (chapter 23)

3yr
fafnir_the_great
fafnir_the_greatLv11

5 stars because I fell like it and enjoy the book. sghshdhdhdhdhdhdhehebejeowowjbrhfudiiejenrhfufieieejbrfhudierjrhrbrjiridirjrhrjed

3yr
Amazer_Joe
Amazer_JoeLv1

I've read this two times.. author I need moreee, pls finish the break quickly and come back soon. This novel is amazing, the grammar is good and the characters are all very flushed out, The best thing about the novel is the twists though. Keep up the good work author !!

3yr
Mob_Character
Mob_CharacterLv1

I just finished reading the last chapter and what can I say.... it's perfect. There's so many twists that I don't believe everything that I read completely. The characters are rational and likable. The only negative I can think of is that I have to wait for a new chapter everyday. Don't abandon us author-san

3yr
AidenPearce72
AidenPearce72Lv4

Up until now story has amazingly interesting. Especially ch 34 ,now that as truly development that I had never thought would happen , I can't wait for new chapters

3yr
Loverboy
LoverboyLv2

I've been reading this book since day it started serialization. At first I was skeptical of it, as the first five chapters weren't all that special but I have to admit that was the wrong because this novel is an absolute gem. The twists, the writing style of the author, the characters are all very entertaining to read. From chapter 1 to 52 this is a masterpiece in the making. So please don't drop the novel, author-san. Ignore the comments that say otherwise. Your story is awesome. Good Luck. [img=recommend]

3yr
Dream_Seeker_729
Dream_Seeker_729Lv14

Light travels faster than sound. This is why some people appear bright until you hear them speak. Alan Dundes All the things I really like to do are either immoral, illegal or fattening. Alexander Woollcott

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