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zQuinC
zQuinCLv143yr
2021-12-01 07:57

The story is good but the grammar is unbearable. It's dissapointing. You could've done a better job. It's like reading a lousy wuxia story with a realistic genre.

Basketball Myth

Bballguru
4.3
208 Chs

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Bballguru
BballguruAuthor

I don`t know why you think that is but please offer a more constructive criticism on where to improve it. I hope that I can gather all the suggestion and maybe make some changes later on, on previous chapters. I also said that it is my first time with this so bear with me.

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Bballguru
BballguruAuthor

Author Here! I`m just a beginner author so forgive me if there is noticeable grammar mistakes, I`m still working on it. Please provide me with constructive criticism.

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Potato_Sama
Potato_SamaLv4

the name is basketball myth: super guard . you can find it in mtlnovel, it has about 1488 chaps. good job on the editing man. but do give the source in the description before people starts to question you.

3yr
Claqiooo
ClaqioooLv4

a novel that focuses solely on a sport? i had already read a novel that focuses on the mc being an actor and the likes... but this is my first sport novel... seems like fun

3yr
sam_dutt
sam_duttLv13

Good story. Please continue updating more author . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3yr
DeusaderVulting
DeusaderVultingLv14

I would love to get into this right away but thise strange bot accounts with the email make this more intimidating than it really should be....

3yr
0K0
0K0Lv4

The translation is good. This story too is good for he loss and the games are realistic in my opinion and I think the nationalism here is lessen. I don't know, I have not yet read at the point where he you know go to America. Good job for the translation though..

3yr
Daoist_LongBottom
Daoist_LongBottomLv1

Don't read this after like a few hundred chapters, it really goes completly downhill, tried to finish this, buts it almost impossible to read with being infuriated by the same cliches used over and over again and the same lazy writing...does this guy not know how to write anything other than "mc (teamate) gets injured and he must rise up" among other things.

3yr
Eikke
EikkeLv4

Very good nice :) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv13

What's the romance like? I don't wanna read it with some cheating, Romance issues going on. Makes it hella annoying, although if there is and done correctly than I'm all up for it.

3yr
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