An Apocalyptic world with more than what meets the eye. Give it a try, you might grow attached. - Renovator. PS: I enjoy it reading it, if it counts.

It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

there's to much unnecessary conflict and strong characters. higivugvuvuguvugygygygygg66g6gyfyfygygyvyvyvyvyvyvyv7g6g7v7g7g7ggg7vg7g7gv7v7

is this novel on hiatus ? or did he stop writing like he said he wouldn’t do? hate when authors make false promises it makes me not even want to start the novel tbh.

Author, the world background and the story development seems forced and rushed. I didn't really understand the whole labyrinth thing and world invasion fully and it seems like someone cleared all the floors. Also you still didn't tell the name of the horned beasts and casually avoided it. Overall the story is nice and amazing fight scenes, but it looks like the MC is always forced to fight something and no time to train. The last second saving cliches I didn't really like it but I guess after volume 1 the progression tones down a bit in order to understand the whole apocalypse thing.

When I started this , the actions of MC at the start almost dissuaded me since it's a really serious subject and for me to vibe with it, the writing has to feel from a genuine place. I think u handled it pretty well, if there was all this fake edgelord behavior throughout the novel or BS psudo psychology I would have dropped. Instead u wrote a really interesting novel with interesting powers, and lots of plots and characters driving it. I think what I most enjoy is how fast world events are unwinding, how things don't just wait for MC. He is barely keeping up and that style of writing is engaging, keep up the strong work

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Didnt think i’d be returning to webnovel after my favourite book ended but after reading this im glad i did! Enganging world, so many things happening at once to keep me entertained! This has potential.

MC is a punch bag. After every serious battle he is losing consciousness due to overexertion, wounds, or blood loss. He is mentally weak but somehow manage to survive. His sister is not smart as well. She accepted her forster parents after they took her by force from her beloved brother and even served in some organization.... Is it not clear that the one who divided you and your brother by force can not have any good will to you? The world is a mess. Huge holes in the middle of the cities, zomby apocalypse, alien invasion, beasts attacks what else? The future will show. The government sucks. Hidden organizations even more so. Reason for alien invasion simply stupid excuse. In short: "rest only in our dreams". People definetly lacking brains there. The more i read the more depressing and hopeless it be becomes.