Let's start with the review. The story is about an apocalyptic scenario that changes the world and ultimately removes everyone from their former daily lives, forcing them into fighting for survival. When it comes to the writing style, it's first-class and enjoyable for me. It's well above average compared to the things you find here on webnovel. Like some other readers already suggested, showing more off is never too bad. My problem with the novel is, to be honest, two small things. I read around like 8 chapters so forgive me if it no longer holds, but the gender distribution feels slightly off as if more females are in the story compared to their counterparts (the male gender), which can easily be fixed^^. Another little problem for me is that the building of the shelters and their understanding of how abilities work is a little fast-paced, which can also be explained with mother earth. I'm interested in how the otherworldy mutants came into existence and how they differ from each other. It would also be interesting to see if they're able to develop a hierarchical structure or intercommunication between each other. Overall, I enjoyed my read till now and will continue with it. I hope you keep up the work. This is just a short review a more in-depth review can probably be expected on another day when the novel has more chapters.
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Thank you so much for the review...😃 as for the gender thing it will be fixed with time i assure you... as for the fast pacing... I actually I apologise coz I wrote this story for a WPC and at the beginning I was hurrying through it.. but uts gonna be delved into deeper
