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JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv13yr
2021-10-29 03:50

Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I read so far: World Building: The world-building in this one is quite clear as it's set in the apocalypse where a mutated creatures. It is a quite an intriguing and thrilling concept for the this novel. Therefore, I do hope the author can expand more about the mutated creature element and how they going to give a major impact to the story development or even exploring more about their origins. Character: Bernard is quite okay and relatable character as he saw the whale lizard, he ran away in fear. However, I do have some nitpicky opinion, I think it's best for the author to reduce the real life reference from him so it can make Bernard more a serious character. Overall, I also can see his development too or building up his true motivation of joining the forces that hunt down the mutated creature or even exploring more about the gambling concept of his character. While the other characters are okay for now and I can some room of development for them too. Writing Style: I think the author needs to add more showing rather than telling to make this book more interesting and engaging to read. Overall, the writing style right now is quite smooth with flow of the story and enjoyable to read. That's all I have to say and Keep up the good work!!

Gamble in a dying world

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Shade_Arjuun
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Hey guys, Shade here! To those reading this story, at this current time I'm starting the fifth volume of this story, which will be longest one and most action packed, filled to the brim with characters and their development. It will also features weirder innate abilities so please hang on. This story is an apocalypse type which focuses on human conduct when there's an apocalypse, slowly drifting into how the superpowered individuals will react and how the non-superpowered will react as well. Word of warning... PLEASE do not skip the beginning of the 'CHAOS IN A DYING WORLD' volume. I know the main character barely features in it, but it is extremely important to the plot, building up one of the villains and developing one of the important side characters. It also has a ton of fun innate abilities, so please do not skip it. It's more interesting than you think. Thanks for reading!

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Para1
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okay so, first of all, this author is a beast in writing so if you stumble upon this story give their author's stories a read aswell. the story has a thought process, it will leave you thinking on every line and paragraph a good description of humans, human nature is presented here nothing short of gold, I mean the story and the author.

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Emmy_logz2
Emmy_logz2Lv12

Quite an idea you have got here. The story takes a turn all of a sudden to bring the unpreparedness that an apocalypse brings. The near death despair is real with lots of regret. I like the flow of the story as well as the reality of most most homes in developing world. Keep it up

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Vidit_Verma
Vidit_VermaLv4

I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. I love the creativity of the author. I just wish that I get to read tons of chapters on a daily basis. This novel is too good especially an explanation of a different world. The main lead is amazing and that makes it quite admiring. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Beautiful_Mind
Beautiful_MindLv13

Author killed me, diced, me and reincarnated me just to read this masterpiece all over again! I've said it earlier let's run a poetry page together 😢 This is wonderful. If you're looking for a story that goes more in depth that looks real. This is your story. Most touching novel ever.! Great job!

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daniella19
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Am being baised but as long as MC loved demon Slayer then he's in my good books. But that aside, the world background and character development is unique. Reading this story won't disappoint you, and am waiting to see how far gambling will take our MC. Great job author-kun

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D0pp3lg4ng3r
D0pp3lg4ng3rLv15

Fantastic character design and my goodness, such powerful writing. It's absolutely amazing. The character development as well is a force to be reckoned with as all the characters are extremely well shaped.

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Kuroyasha404
Kuroyasha404Lv1

This deserves a 5 star. The writing is nice, and the plot setting is the standard apocalypse world. The mc's abilities are also very interesting. To me, the best parts of the novel are the slight touches the author has added to display the despair of the apocalyptic scenario. It really makes the world feel more real.

3yr
Venusean
VenuseanLv2

The writing itself is very much above average, while the outstanding narration takes the writing up a notch and makes the reading experience enjoyable. The updates look to be stable. At 22 chapters, the story is still in its embryonic stage, but it's looking to be a rather creative take on the apocalypse and ability genre, while the characterization is good, and the world background is also done well. If there is one thing I personally find glaring, it is that information on the power system was revealed a bit hastily and could have been done with a more gradual approach(though perhaps there is still much mystery to it, and in that case, this nitpick is obsolete).

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