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Hennesy46
Hennesy46Lv152yr
2022-08-02 15:15

The plot of the main story is really interesting and the side stories are nice to read as well. However, the chapters are overflowing with typos, grammatical mistakes and so on. It seems that in some parts the writer used a speech dictation program, so that words appear in phonetic form. Unedited, obviously not proofread, some parts are incomprehensible. It’s a mess, tbh.

His Witch Queen

Amaira_Knight
4.5
208 Chs

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xiaohai_23
xiaohai_23Lv11

I'm always in for some good strong female character. And for handsome and vampire mlS, of course ;) The enemies-turned-lovers trope makes everything more dynamic, and one can't wait for the leads' next interaction! Good job, it's very entertaining :D

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MissaLeigh
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I really like this story so far, at least the amount I can understand. The extreme amount misspellings and grammatical errors make it hard to know if I’m understanding it correctly since I’m having to make guesses often. It makes it really hard to see worth spending coins to unlock chapters. So reader beware, it’s good but reminds me of a bad MTL translation of my favorite comic.

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precious_pruddy
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The synopsis of the novel is catchy. As a fan of vampire stories, I would say that it is well done. I am looking forward to reading more chapters and I recommend it to anyone who loves beast-human love stories.

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Amaira_Knight
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Hello everyone! Just to be little descriptive about the content, it would be mixture of the historical time with fantasy element❤ This novel will not drop, and please help the author by adding it to your library!🥺💘 As well, do show your support to win the contest as well🥰 Thank you so much!💯❣

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Tamarama
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The story was very interesting. I liked the different twists the story took. It's pretty clear that English is not our author's first learned language, but most of the story can be easily figured out. Very imaginative and interesting story with happy and sad moments to keep you drawn in.

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Justina_6692
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it's a good read, drags a little in the middle but overall not bad

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Tammy_Brandon
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I just wish it wasn't over. I love this book!!😭😭😭❤❤❤

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AvidReader042
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Good story and character development. Engrossing read.

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Book covers get me hooked. Just like this book I am in love with the fl, i love her drama Kudos author I love the story development and as time goes on, i get more hooked I love this

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