Review Detail of Pork in Godly crafter in DxD

I mean, that was kinda the point of the story. It is geared for and driven by that generated drama and doesn't adhear to the source so this can happen. I'm not sure why you're complaining. Almost all fanfics based on the initial abuse twist the source to make it happen. The synopsis should have been a clear warning about what you were getting into.

ohh dear then you must have hated the novel the way of the dragon no because there is 2 whole arc for the drama

What is wrong with this novel? novels are only made with the sole purpose being entertainment, it does not matter if the author sticks original fanfiction or not, the sypnosis gives us a clear warning about the plot, by the end it's just a fanfiction

then dont write a fanfic and instead write an original. other wise it is just a cheap knock off. cause at that point you are only using names of places and people. can hardly be called a fanfic.

lol imagine giving a review, and then someone comments this, the absolute hypocrisy. dont you feel embarrassed ? jees lol what a stupid comment.

The whole point of a fanfic is to expand on a story, make a change to the original, and/or use existing plot, characters, and power systems so the reader will know most of what they need to know going in(assuming it's not someone reading a fanfic without seeing the original first). In my opinion, the fanfics that make zero changes/additions to the source just follow the canon events to a tee, and it's these fanfics that are cheap knockoffs of the source while stories that make changes are legit fanfics in my mind. Although, I agree, changing a character so the story is just constant nonsensical abuse that then turns to constant bashing is not worth reading. However, in that case, it's less about it being a bad fanfic due to changing characters and more about the author making a bad story in general that has no meaningful plot. In the case of this story though.... the author has done a great job of giving motivations behind the neglect/abuse, and the author gave the MC great reasonings behind MCs actions with his family as a result.

Not really, while i agree with some points of your arguement it's a fanfic not the original at the end of the day. It makes sense that the family would be that way with him as they're devils, they would look down on the mc as they would see him as inferior or a disappointment by not inheriting their destruction powers. And as for rias she is simply following the examples she's being shown by other members of the family/servants. The author cant exactly put the mc into the bael family as there is already a character who from the original didn't inherit the powers of his clan. And whilst i agree with the idea another clan could have been used for MC story plot i dont hate authors choice of the Gremory household as i can believe it due to the current head of that family.

Power of Destruction is Bael family trait not Gremory so using that as the bone of contention between mc and his Gremory family just doesn't make sense. The only reason Sirzechs and Rias got d power of destruction is cos of their mother, Venelana, who married into the Gremory family therefore her offspring will never be considered Bael clansmen and also Gremory have a different credo that they live by and its not whether you inherited the power of destruction or not like d Bael family. We all know this is a fanfic and things are changed at d discretion of d author but when u make changes they must be logical and shouldn't be so out there that it detracts from the overall story as seen in this instance (I.e. 108 likes for d original comment and only 9 replies that seem to go against) Suspension of belief can take u only so far with a fanfic.

author is posting this book here so he obviously wants others to read it and then some idiots like you come and start to say don't read it if you don't like .

Lol true. The author is posting his book online and of course he wants others to read t and then some stupid a bit like this comes and says ' Dont read it if you don't like. '

Just don't read it. Ez. Clearly this is not your cup of tea.

one of the more stupid comments i have read

The plot Sounds like some chinese face slapping poor borther in law kinda thing

I think that many people don't understand what author of this review means. Gremory clan is shown in original works as loving and caring, they value family and even treat their servants as friends and equals. Just recall from your memory how Rias treated almost usless Gasper, and read in ff how she treats her twin brother. It could be completely justifiable if author gives reasons for such drastic character changes, few sentences would be enough. If author needs some tension and drama, he could do all of that in another house, choose any from 70 pillars(Sitri excluded, there would be brocon) Best available house IMHO is phenex clan, if he will be without phenex immortality, then there is a lot of drama and mocking for free )

I do think that fanfics need a reason for the abuse or it will just be nonsensical drama. For example, some sort of mind control or suggestion that makes them mistreat MC. However, I don't think a reason is needed for a change from canon as long as everything still "fits". In this case, while the Gremories are very different from canon without explanation, it still "fits" since they instead put strength and bloodline above all else while being loving if those criteria are met.

Yeah I only watched 2 seasons and even i know thats not true plus, there is literally a whole comment above that uses canon knowledge that discredit everything you just said by Zeyziel

Dude..... are you even reading what I wrote? I'm not saying this follows canon at all. I'm saying that deviating from canon by an extreme amount is okay as long as it's not pointless drama and it's backed with some reason for the change. Don't yell at me for using turkey broth in chicken noodle soup when my argument in the first f**king place is to give alternative recipes.

And there was literaly no logical reason, they just randomly decided to isolate the mc because he didn't inherit something that isn't even apart of their family line which wasn't the familt personality trait..if the author gave an actual reason I would be ok with that