Story sound awesome. But in my opinion, too many wish is not good. All the mc need is high intelligence. being smart enough too build his own AI. building a farm where no one could touch like a valley surrounded by the radiation watsteland and probably monster. mc is smart enough to build a teleporter allowing access to him and anyone he allow. removing two wish and making it fit more into the world. i don’t really like how something unnatural is pushed into the world. A supernatural power that can’t be explain squezed into a sci story.
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LIKEHi Lazyhead, thank you for reading my story i appreciate it , about the wishes I'm also considering in changing it into two only, but for now I'll try continuing first and see, after all this is my first time writing a story so i can always restart if this story don't go well. I hope you continue reading and write reviews about some mistakes i make. Agin thank you