Review Detail of Tyyx in Lineage Saga
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The quality of the writing is excellent, everything is understandable on an imaginative level. The descriptions and details are vivid, which is certainly refreshing. However, I still have no idea who the MC is, so many points of view and characters in so few paragraphs can be exhausting, mentally, making it difficult to understand the actions and what is going on in general. The idea of the story is quite interesting, but I did not manage to acquire enough interest, especially in the way the characters develop, ephemerally in 10 chapters of this duration. I suppose you can expect something from the synopsis and tags, in turn considering the world it's set in, but what I read gave me an idea of what it will be like. Still thanks for the effort.
Lineage Saga
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Thank you for your insight, I am sorry that it wasn't to your liking, but I appreciate your feedback. Personally, the closest thing to an MC would be the Scholar. There are more and it becomes clearer as to who the two main foci are by the end of Book 1. However, they are not immensely more important than the rest of the cast. The idea being that every character has relevance, none possess plot armor and anything can happen. Time is required to build an empire and a Lineage has to start somewhere. So the pace of development will be glacial, but the first three books are meant mainly to set the world. What combat is like, who the antagonists behind the curtain are, and the descent of a world at relative peace towards an era of conflict. After Book 3 the main focus is going to be on kingdom management, development, and upkeep. So, I know this has been a long winded response, but the short answer is that the entire caravan and its people are nominally the main characters, with the Scholar and the young arena champion as standing slightly above within that group. Hope that helps.