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I'm done with authors that think that only tragedies will make a great character development. I dont even care anymore about all those that have been killed throughout the first few chapters. They had no meaningful additions to the story that contributes in a good way that develops the mc's character development or even their own character development. Those side character are only there so that you the author have a reason to force the mc to become stronger. it such a shame though you had a good writing style. Though I'm wondering why most new authors don't understand that there are more ways to develop a character than them going through bad situation. I mean for example this fanfic the characters killed are only there to be killed and "develop" the mc. i mean what are you aiming for this fanfic, is it meant to be a power fantasy where he gets stronger than others? then why bother with useless side characters. if you meant for this to be a somewhat of a natural progression then why kill those useless characters than spending time to develop them more, make them more emotionally there and part of the overall story? i hope you improve, i love the way you write, and i hope you continue and be a great author in the future.

In the World of Tensura WAY TOO EARLY, Another Route

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really?! im a new reader who hasnt started yet so im unsure of whether this is a good novel or not.