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KMS_UnbrandedLv42yr
2023-01-26 12:14

the MC is great until his personality turns into a overly goofy disappointment. like how does having a child turn him into a dense over the top idiot.

In the World of Tensura WAY TOO EARLY, Another Route

Golden_Slime
4.5
92 Chs

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Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

don't know, same thing happened to Isshin Kurosaki.

1yr
Cheesy_Icecream
Cheesy_IcecreamLv3

Isshin was always a jokester and kinda lazy. He just pulled through whenever he needed to protect people

Genn_stars:don't know, same thing happened to Isshin Kurosaki.
9mth
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0_0e
0_0eLv4

please don't be a harem I haven't read a 1-1 relationship, the story is really going well great backround and I love the fact that the mc is not the supposedly protagonist that has a system and supper op

3yr

RyugaNyxOuroboros
RyugaNyxOuroborosLv1

It's like watching a Naruto fic without the author having seen Naruto, in this case the author creates attacks with things that have nothing to do with TenSura, it's as if in Naruto you tried to use chakra to create a beam of energy without having to use the lightning element. So far you can see that the author does not fully know or see TenSura and how the power system works.

2yr
BCqpLAN_CrOw
BCqpLAN_CrOwLv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
_Scarlett_Dawn
_Scarlett_DawnLv4

Everything is awesome! The writing, as well as the mc is amazing! I hope to see more of this in the future, have a great holiday season! *words*

3yr
WintyLP
WintyLPLv1

Dont drop this

2yr
Nutting
NuttingLv4

Stereotypical Hero story with nothing to add and cliche plot. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
ThisIsSPARTA159874
ThisIsSPARTA159874Lv13

There is no character development for mc...not even after his parents death , after he got to know his best friends secret ,after his supposed friends betrayal...

2yr
Mountain_Of_Books
Mountain_Of_BooksLv11

Serieus review here. First of all the quality of the writing is top tier, like your not gonna find many stories better grammatically correct than this one (at least I haven't). Sencond the stability, So far at the moment of this review, updates are fairly consistent but guarantee quality! Third story development, So far the story has nice development so far and has definitly interested met. The mc has to face a lot of hardships and this is the one complaint I have so far. It's good that he has to face difficulties but a win every now and then couldn't hurt could it? Then to the final and most important point of this whole review and the most important thing to any fanfic in my opinion! The powersystem. Tensura has a very complicated powersystem and because the translation is kindy iffy between the different versions of the slime story it can be difficult to understand the full scope of the powersystem. HOWEVER this absolute madlad of an author has managed to be 99% accurate with the powersystem, and I cannot tell you how much respect I have for that. This is literally the only slime storie that has managed to capture this part of the slime universe this accurately in my opinion! Conclusion, Absolutely worth every second spend reading SO GIVE ME MORE!!

2yr
RyzenShine
RyzenShineLv4

Is this fanfic dropped?????????????????????

1yr
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