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lingchenxi
lingchenxiLv22yr
2022-01-15 11:07

Never did think I'll be actually getting so far into a werewolf book but here goes: 1. excellent world building. nowadays werewolf books that I've glanced through and dropped at the first chapter feel normal and always the same thing. this one actually has a great definition of fantasy. 2. description. Author gives an explanation in the prologue for us to understand the world, races etc. Good descriptions in every chapter. 3. Language and pacing. It's easy to read so far and well paced. thank you for this wonderful read.

Blessed with the Moon

DyaAran
4.9
17 Chs

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DyaAran
DyaAranAuthor

Thank you so much

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Queeniecat
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This novel has a lot of promise. The world-building is fantastic, with three political factions at play. If the author continues to develop this well, we'll have a future epic fantasy novel on our hands! The concept of vampires, werewolves, and humans has been done before but what makes this novel stand out is the complexity with which the author portrays this traditional setting. There are a lot of original concepts here that I can't wait for the author to develop. The other part of this novel that I really enjoyed was the interactions between the characters. Our FL is a youthful, vibrant girl that has a unique personality. She isn't perfect. On the contrary, the story starts out with her making a mistake. But as a result, this creates a sense of the inevitable and really pushes the plot forward. I love how everything began and how the fast pace of the action led to her fated meeting with the ML (or at least, I'm presuming that he's the ML <3). They dynamic between them is exciting and I can't wait to see how the tension develops! If I had to mention one thing for improvement, it would be the occasional grammar mistake. But it is evident in the later chapters that the author has made incredible effort to improve on this! Definitely, this is a small issue and does not hinder the novel from being very enjoyable. Please keep up the good work, author! I would thoroughly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys an exciting fantasy romance and I foresee a lot of romantic entanglement to come!

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Jude_K_1656
Jude_K_1656Lv10

I find this light read but entertaining. I'm intrigued about the lead characters, how they're going to be connected in the line of romance. I'm so hooked that I will definitely keep going. Guys, a must-read plot. Worth reading

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KHRIKY
KHRIKYLv10

This is really fascinating, like I don't usually read werewolf novels but the plot really drew me in and I couldn't help but read all the chapters! I do hope you update but that's entirely up to you :)

2yr
Yvette_Celia
Yvette_CeliaLv10

i jist read the first chapter and its good already. i will definitely back here to continue my reading to find out about the journey. keep the writing author

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azunaima
azunaimaLv1

Hello author 😍🌺🌺🌺🌺 Couldn't get enough of your works please write more 😊 the first chapter just sold me away and I am mind blown!🙆 Don't give up 🌺🌺🌺🌺 Love your work 😍

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immortal_shizu322
immortal_shizu322Lv1

most of the werewolf stories these days are sure cliche, but this one was a better option. the world's structure was properly described and the character design is also good just waiting for next chap

2yr
Daoist97tfu
Daoist97tfuLv2

This novel is great and would love to see more from the author. Although there are a few grammatical and spelling errors the flow of the story is fluent. It is engaging as well and the author is commended for this.

2yr
Freylingo
FreylingoLv3

I love the plot and your unique way of writing a story, i can sense a Disney, fairy tale concept here with different subspecies which is such a chef kiss for me since this is exactly my type. So yep kudos to the author, plus I will also definitely will be keeping this to my library.

2yr
empressblackrose09
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