Don't like the way you have designed the MC. There is too much drama in the story. Everyone wants to see his quirk powers in marvel instead of all the depressing struggle that MC faces to find himself back in his home. Don't do so much drama and try to get his powers back and get back some action into the story. This is an MHA X Marvel crossover everyone expects some action, not the drama.
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A good story should have drama, action and romance. Personally, I will never wrote a story filled with action and not show the emotional struggle endured bY the mc.
I agree that it needs to have everything. So get the story rolling man, it's only been MCs inner struggle till now and you didn't put anything else other than that. And the romance is depressing as well. The story hasn't moved at all. I guess what you said about the story not being everyone's cup of tea works here.
you suck!
Dude your not listening to what he’s saying. I haven’t read the story, but seeing this makes me believe that you can’t be taken seriously. There’s nothing wrong with stories that have the main character go through internal struggle, but you have to add something else in the story to make it interesting to read.
Read the story then... Can't comment and don't read the story... After you read it, then tell me what you think... If you agree with this review or not.
yes I agree ,his struggle was stupid and to much drama I want wild adventure not fun©king depression if I know ,I will read the reviews First before read your stupid fanfic now I m going depression , i think pyschopath fanfic was more fine than your fanfic
