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Leo_Bassist
Leo_BassistLv133yr
2021-11-05 00:07

I'm disappointed, the idea of the starting story in this ff is so - so. Imagine he gets the power at the price of removing memories, but personality and mindset remain still?? Also his mindset like loyal fanatic. So what's kind of logic is that? Even Amnesia will forget his personality or mindset, now removing memories but doesn't clear personalities? I won't surprise later on the chapter if Mc will turn to a loyal tool of the village or become a fanatic shinobi. Like his previous fanfic, I thought author will improve his another story but kinda disappointing

Reborn in Naruto-World

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doomsdayangel
doomsdayangelLv3

mc is too naive and stupid

3yr
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Overshotfir979
Overshotfir979Lv4

Good Lookin out! Imma have to pass then.

3yr
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Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr

MarkinBitchs
MarkinBitchsLv2

The start is questionble, cant say its the best, like the mc's species. His main goal is finding his mother and is cold. Being taught by the first, having jigen abilties and shown to be a genis.

3yr
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

moreeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

3yr
Nicola_mreno
Nicola_mrenoLv3

El comienzo es cuestionable, no puedo decir que sea el mejor, como la especie de mc. Su objetivo principal es encontrar a su madre y tiene frΓ­o. Ser enseΓ±ado por el primero, tener habilidades de jigen y demostrar ser un genis.

3yr
Wvttz
WvttzLv4

youre first was better tbh

3yr
Bwoi_Guru69
Bwoi_Guru69Lv4

well great plot and character building tho slightly behind when it comes to character development, translation is good enough and no grammar error detected so far. anyway πŸ‡ pieceπŸ‘

3yr
badangel_luciel
badangel_lucielLv14

nice storie 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

3yr
roblester00
roblester00Lv4

i'm dropping this the moment you get involved with danzo, as mucj as the mc's character is a bit over the top he should have instincts not to make a deal with danzo considering he was a loyal soldier AND survived isshiki

3yr
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