Review Detail of Varun_Mohunah in Fairy Tail: New Dragon Slayer

I will be honest, the fanfic is great but. Author you should try to rewrite the dialogues because it is frankly very hard to follow like sometimes a person say 1 line and sometimes 2. It becomes hard to understand who is saying what. In my honest opinion, continue to make chapters but don't upload them, it's just to have you keep track of what you're doing. And instead of uploading the chapters, rewrite the dialogues of previous chapters. I think many readers are like me dropping this fanfic because it is difficult to read otherwise grammer is good. Thanks for reading my opinion and rant. Goodbye.