Review Detail of Black_lotus_2004 in Repent In Purgatory

First of all...How can you write such a good novel? You almost made me lose confidence in my own work!!! 1. Writing quality is the best I have read from originals novels, Grammar is good, punctuations are also good, Descriptions are bit lengthy, but in a good way, you won't feel like you are reading a poem and could engage in the story properly. 2. Story dude.....its just 2 chapters right now, but story already made me feel sad for the characters in the story. I could actually feel how bland and boring the world is and felt worried about my own future....... 3. Characters are nicely fleshed out, especially Mc. The emotions are perfectly described in this story, which is a big plus. 4. Updating stability is the problem....But hey, writing such a lengthy chapter with good Descriptions and grammars takes time right? 5. World is already being described just from first 2 chapters. I personally think that, if the author could keep the same standard throughout the novel, it would be eligible for an Anime production... Maybe you could aim for that? Anyway!! Nice work in full honesty....