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Review Detail of KamiKrimson in Destined To Be.

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The way it is written needs work. And as Haru said, the changes of the point of view can be confusing at times. Usually if you have many characters and want to express every bit of their thought or emotion, the third person's point of view is ideal. But if you want your main character to shine, you may stick to her point of view alone. What I love though is how realistic this novel is and how firm the Heroine's virtue is. I hope this Novel will be finished as there are not many novels containing Muslims setting. It is interesting and is worth reading if given the effort

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Sure. Thank you