Review Detail of beloved_writer in This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together

I just want to say the new book cover is beautiful 🥰. With this story, the author shows their creativity and good story telling ability 🤩🤩. Though this is a very cute and enjoyable story to read, there are some errors that hindered my ability to continue. I occasionally had to reread over the run on sentences and the dialogue— since the tags are included in the parentheses. Because of these grammatical choices, I was just a bit confused while reading 😅. But nonetheless, this is a really captivating story. Every writer has their own style, and writing rules, well, are they really necessary when writing fiction? Great job author on this piece. I hope Emma has a happy ending or my heart might not be able to take it 😓. Amazing work 🌸✨!!!