Review Detail of Yoan_Roturier in This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together

Alright, so far so good. I think you can improve on the writing but it's not something that can be learned in one go and the only efficient way to learn it is to be curious and keep writing. I'm not into romance so I can't exactly review this the way a romance reader would. But according to what I read, I think you're doing just fine. Keep up the good work, author.