Review Detail of Stormzz in This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together

The story moves at a fairly decent pace, it doesn't feel like things stop for too long in one place unnecessarily. Chapters are a nice and conveniently short length to read. Development of characters feels fine, with their backgrounds and motivations stated to us as the reader. One criticism I have is the quality of the punctuation and grammar. Sometimes sentences run on for too long and sometimes punctuation is in the wrong spots, which really detracts from the overall quality. If this was fixed then I think it would drastically improve