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David_Kretschmer
David_KretschmerLv31yr
2023-09-28 22:37

the writing is so bad that iIam not Shure if the person was entirely sane while writing this. it could just have been a monkey hitting the keys of a writing machine as well

REINCARNATED IN NARUTO WORLD : WITH SYSTEM

MADARAUCHIHA
2.9
713 Chs

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Shanky_S
Shanky_SLv5

Seems machine translated, story is like any other naruto fanfic, mc is an uchiha, at the timeline of minato,etc. has a system that gives rewards and punishments

3yr

Valentin_Reyes_9115
Valentin_Reyes_9115Lv1

It is really fantastic, at first I thought it would be a Chinese cultivation novel, but surprisingly, it has a strong depth, it is well balanced between comedy moments (it has made me laugh a lot) and the serious moments are incredible, it really is one of the best naruto fanfic I've read, it reminds me of Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan.

3yr
jayjayche990
jayjayche990Lv2

Cliche story with a sassy system. Not worth reading since half of sentences in any given paragraph is nonsensical or gibberish. Seems it's just another generic Chinese machine translated fanfic.

3yr
Arc_Dragon
Arc_DragonLv11

At first I thought its same as always uchiha bloodline and all but then I really started to enjoy the Story ,Its enjoyable based on your taste

2yr
izzna
izznaLv14

this ff has so much potential but ruined by grammars and wrong wordings. The metaphors used in the ff is not usually used in English so you have to think what the f. is the character talking about.

1yr
Chips_8019
Chips_8019Lv3

The story is not bad however the English is difficult to read. I was forced to correct the paragraphs in my head to read it. The system makes no sense as well and could be easily improved for example adding some info dumps explaining it would be a life saver. as the book is now I advise you not to read it until someone edits the book to make it easier to understand.

3yr
DaoistiNwWmC
DaoistiNwWmCLv13

It is a good fix but it around 200 the system disappears and it doesn’t show up anymore as far as I have read

9mth
Kennchan
KennchanLv5

Its really hard to read this. I can like stand almost 30 chapters of it but can't go on any further. Its better than MTL but just a bit. Maybe if this story was editted and the grammars are much convenient to read then I might try again but right now I just can't

2yr
BrokenandBored123
BrokenandBored123Lv3

Poorly translated Chinese fic. Could have been good with a proper translation, but it leaves out a lot of words or just becomes gibberish. If someone ever feels like doing an actual translation please let me know.

5mth
slowxzy
slowxzyLv4

this fanfic is about an Uchiha with a system before the minato became hokage. the problem is it's mtl and it's unreadable because of the writing quality, you can't understand a thing.

6mth
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