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Review Detail of Khaled_Azzam in Harry Potter: World on Fire

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The concept has potential but is ruined by the personality of the MC. He is too arrogant, has a huge ego, is sometimes smart and most times too stupid and is not self aware. He acts like an asshole and is surprised when he isn't liked. He's supposed to be hiding the fact the he's a transmigrator and a pendragon but is exposing himself at every turn(by exposing too much of his abilities and future knowledge) but he has plot armour that makes those around him become stupid and not notice or simply do notice yet nothing becomes of it. It reminds me of those Chinese novels.To be honest, it was readable in the beginning and I was enjoying myself a bit but after while it became too much whether it was the MCs personality, the plot and the many plot holes.I recommend the author to re do the entire novel and make it better

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