Review Detail of lord_couchpotato in Harry Potter: World on Fire

The Concept is pretty good and the chapters are fun to read. Though i will still only give it 4 stars as there are many grammatical errors and pov changing between first person and third person. Another reason would be that the background seems kinda forced. These dragons who were super powerful were all killed off as they needed to sleep to store magic power is a bit of a stretch i mean why not just make a ward around your sleeping room(cave?) or heck sleep in shifts? or just kill your enemies when you are awake. This excuse could explain how wizards could have killed one or two but not the whole species also pendragons were the most powerful family but it was also nearly destroyed it all seem too forced. Plus were are these all past old wizards i mean we would see some kind of legacy if the knowledge about pendragon family could be passed down then why not those ancient spells were passed down, why are all the wizards soo weak now? Too many loop holes could be found with this setting.