I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.
Dark_Sovereign_28
Liked it!
LIKEI have now read up to chapter 30 and the grammar is a little better or maybe I have just gotten used to it. The story is progressing in a decent manner and the MC is gets some really OP abilities. I would advise the author to spent more time editing the chapters if possible because the story has potential.