Review Detail of Iris_3086 in MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

This story is great, the amount of thought that has been put into this is incredible. While some of the paragraphs have their ending words repeated and it lowers immersion, the repeats are periodic and everything else has good grammar itself. The way the worlds react to the Games is plausible, and the character's development is also convincing. On another note, just my idea, but if the two worlds will eventually interact in Oasis, I think that there should be an announcement that says [Dear Citizens of Japan, due to the cultural similarities of your history and the New World's, you have been chosen to be able to access Hubs 73-75 prematurely. We hope you will serve as moderators when the new Hubs go public and help the World of Ninjas adapt to the World of Marvel's technology. Best Regards, Oasis Managment.] Just in case 😁