Review Detail of Saul_Wiscovich in MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

A possible interesting story premise held back by mediocre writting, mediocre plot building and mediocre character building. The author doesnt bother trying to write better or longer chapters either. The writting style feels like one of those horrible Wuxia translations with horrible sentence structure and every character acting lime a moron. Later the author tells us Occlumency can stop the mutant Rogue power from affecting him. Utter stupidity. When will people learn that the only thing Occlumency does is stop Legilimency and thats it.