Review Detail of West in MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Been on the fence with dropping this for about a week now, this fic seems to be following the pacing and writing style of chines novels based on the same genre. Plus with these random posts about unrelated matters has dried up most of my enthusiasm for the fic. If I was going to compare this to any fic it would be that one named Black Technology Internet Cafe. It had so many chapters just to fill the word count and praise the MC. No world building and character development is minor and story development has yet to start. I still don't know how people are accepting playing a full immersion VR game without any equipment but a computer/laptop.