Review Detail of luis5224 in MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Great story so far! I love this genre of fanfictions but there are rarely any. I do hope you stay in the game-creating and reactions theme instead of trying to make the MC get involved in the Marvel plot like in the other game fanfic "Game Creator on Marvel" whose MC seems to be planning to get involved with Tony Stark instead of sticking to the gaming theme. I think it is much more enjoyable to see the game creating process and the reactions of the players rather than getting needlessly involved in the plot. It is fine to see how the game will affect the plot of the universe he is in, but involving himself seems pointless to the theme of the story. If you do want the characters to interact then something that would be interesting to see is making the MC go in his own games to play and meeting the other characters. After all, only watching people play may get boring for the MC so playing the games with others would be fun especially if they are total newbies to the game.